After feedback from the one-to-one tutorial I went on to finalise the work from the Diagram rotation. I needed to explore larger scales and more materials. The piece on the left is larger scale and also incorporates my ongoing theme in this series of layering images and capturing multiple viewpoints in one piece, I also worked with wax crayons in this piece as they allowed for larger more fluid movements across the page. Though I am pleased that I explored a larger scale I feel like this piece
could be further improved by building up more layers of colour to add more depth and fluidity.I feel this is captured more successfully in the smaller scale piece on the right that is also wax crayon but this time on an off-cut of wood board. The texture of the board created a nice base for the wax to be worked into and also made the colours more vibrant.
